Gil,
I do not seen any likely hood of transfer switch failure from low voltage because the TRC Surge Guard will disconnect the power for 2 minutes and 15 seconds at any time there is low voltage and will not reconnect until voltage returns, so there will be no current flow through the transfer switch.
If you are in a park were the voltage is below 102V (the TRC disconnect point), you need to disconnect from shore power and move or run on your generator.
The location that you chose for your Surge Guard is the same one that I was going to use until I decided that I did not want to wait the extra 2 plus minutes for power every time that I started the generator. If the extra wait for generator power does not bother you, I see nothing wrong with your installation.
Although a generator related power problem is a possible, it is very rare. I think that your coach has the variable speed 8KW Onan, so overvoltage from an over-speed condition is not a concern since the generator produces DC current and uses an inverter to produce 120V AC. On the other hand the 10KW and 12.5KW units are constant speed units that produce 120V AC current with the generator and over-speed is a real problem if it happens.
Gerald